tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post7879605920279285901..comments2023-10-17T08:25:21.966-07:00Comments on M. Bail - A Writer's Life: Love At First Sight BlogfestM. Bailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12811654487507824088noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-61850998894785165682010-02-16T03:47:44.353-08:002010-02-16T03:47:44.353-08:00Very intriguing and creative. This really drew me ...Very intriguing and creative. This really drew me into the story.Roxyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787088898112141579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-74964731853630872942010-02-15T16:39:11.798-08:002010-02-15T16:39:11.798-08:00Very interesting! I'd never thought about peop...Very interesting! I'd never thought about people transforming into fae, and becoming miniature, before. Thanks for sharing!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-84601368644248268252010-02-14T20:43:55.275-08:002010-02-14T20:43:55.275-08:00Beautiful scene! This makes me want to go read the...Beautiful scene! This makes me want to go read the read of your submission on Critique This! If only I had all the time in the world for reading. Thankfully, I have a lull in school and will be getting around to Critique This is review as much as I can in the next few days. <br />Great scene with Shadow and Holly! Very exciting!Courtney Reesehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05027695819270602098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-13045414585789758892010-02-14T20:22:30.880-08:002010-02-14T20:22:30.880-08:00Followed you over from Courtney's blogfest! I ...Followed you over from Courtney's blogfest! I really enjoyed getting it from both of their perspectives. It takes a lot of talent to do that well and you did it seamlessly. :)Tiffany Nealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843374938222817346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-81484876173381739862010-02-14T18:51:39.770-08:002010-02-14T18:51:39.770-08:00Gotta love a guy with sparkling amethyst eyes. And...Gotta love a guy with sparkling amethyst eyes. And what a brilliant and vivid description of her eyes, too. Hot chemistry going on here.Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-36423393490235526412010-02-14T16:57:37.026-08:002010-02-14T16:57:37.026-08:00Hooray! I loved that scene the first time round, a...Hooray! I loved that scene the first time round, and loved it just as much this time. <br />(I was late to the party too. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04342262917285991152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-51501883487677678482010-02-14T16:02:47.357-08:002010-02-14T16:02:47.357-08:00Charming and funny! I love their shock, his utter ...Charming and funny! I love their shock, his utter dismay and her utter confusion. <br />Thanks for sharing!Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-12032471647053063512010-02-14T12:09:54.258-08:002010-02-14T12:09:54.258-08:00I think you do love scenes very well. Kind of ero...I think you do love scenes very well. Kind of erotic, doesn't go overboard and the feeling between the characters is real.Laura Canonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16574566234310522696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-81481755184945145972010-02-14T12:06:21.124-08:002010-02-14T12:06:21.124-08:00Oh, what a vivid transformation scene! Love parano...Oh, what a vivid transformation scene! Love paranormals, though I haven't ready any in this genre. Love that impact they have on one another from the moment of transformation. Well done!Carolina M. Valdez Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11589934533051907801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2012788981971413608.post-9330798834759586432010-02-14T11:30:55.865-08:002010-02-14T11:30:55.865-08:00Hi Embee
It took a few lines - and very steamy on...Hi Embee<br /><br />It took a few lines - and very steamy ones at that and I was hooked. I want to know more he seems worth the effort.:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.com